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From: Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 18 Sep 2015 19:43:39 +0100
Subject: Tidier wording, and punctuation, in BootSplash.cpp
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Primarily: 'Workspace' in lieu of 'Desktop(s)', and 'Applications' in lieu of 'System Applications'. Plus other minor changes to wording. Ellipses (…) – with leading space, see for example http://english.stackexchange.com/a/28208/11504
---
 lumina-desktop/BootSplash.cpp | 20 ++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

(limited to 'lumina-desktop/BootSplash.cpp')

diff --git a/lumina-desktop/BootSplash.cpp b/lumina-desktop/BootSplash.cpp
index e8502647..b535fff4 100644
--- a/lumina-desktop/BootSplash.cpp
+++ b/lumina-desktop/BootSplash.cpp
@@ -15,31 +15,31 @@ void BootSplash::showScreen(QString loading){ //update icon, text, and progress
   QString txt, icon;
   int per = 0;
   if(loading=="init"){
-    txt = tr("Initializing Session..."); per = 10;
+    txt = tr("Initializing Session …"); per = 10;
     icon = "preferences-system-login";
   }else if(loading=="settings"){
-    txt = tr("Loading Settings..."); per = 20;	  
+    txt = tr("Loading System Settings …"); per = 20;	  
     icon = "user-home";
   }else if(loading=="user"){
-    txt = tr("Checking User Settings..."); per = 30; 
+    txt = tr("Loading User Preferences …"); per = 30; 
     icon = "preferences-desktop-user";
   }else if(loading=="systray"){
-    txt = tr("Registering System Tray..."); per = 40;
+    txt = tr("Preparing System Tray …"); per = 40;
     icon = "preferences-plugin";
   }else if(loading=="wm"){
-    txt = tr("Starting Window Manager..."); per = 50;
+    txt = tr("Starting Window Manager …"); per = 50;
     icon = "preferences-system-windows-actions";	  
   }else if(loading=="apps"){
-    txt = tr("Detecting System Applications..."); per = 60;
+    txt = tr("Detecting Applications …"); per = 60;
     icon = "preferences-desktop-icons";
   }else if(loading=="menus"){
-    txt = tr("Initializing System Menu(s)..."); per = 70;
+    txt = tr("Preparing Menus …"); per = 70;
     icon = "preferences-system-windows";
   }else if(loading=="desktop"){
-    txt = tr("Initializing Desktop(s)..."); per = 80;
+    txt = tr("Preparing Workspace …"); per = 80;
     icon = "preferences-desktop-wallpaper";	
   }else if(loading=="final"){
-    txt = tr("Performing Final Checks..."); per = 90;
+    txt = tr("Finalizing …"); per = 90;
     icon = "pcbsd";	  
   }
   ui->progressBar->setValue(per);
@@ -55,4 +55,4 @@ void BootSplash::showText(QString txt){ //will only update the text, not the ico
   this->show();
   this->update();
   QApplication::processEvents();
-}
\ No newline at end of file
+}
-- 
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